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[TDOH]Soul Reaper ︻デ═一
 
Poem
2009-11-05 2:17 PM PST
UPON A NEW DAWN

- [TDOH] Soul Reaper


I am alpha and omega

Destruction and chaos

Darkness and light

Lust and greed for power

The cold hand that holds your life in its hands

The shadow upon a new dawn

The last hope that dies with you

The pain when u feel the lost

And the anger when u feel the hate

The nightmare when you think it’s all over

The punishment for your greatest mistakes

The 1 thing that haunts you all of your life

The darkness that you see when you close your
eyes

The death that no one can escape from in the end

The hatred and the pain that fuels your life each day

The feeling that runs through your veins every time your life flashes before you

Every time you see that light in the dark and when you try to reach it you only find yourself in a deeper darkness

The scream you wake up in the morning with

The image you see in the mirror close to yours that is only in your head

The person you wanted to say what you felt all of your life but now you realize it’s too late for it

The black eyes that deep inside you exist and you’re afraid to show

The devil that guards you when all of your life you thought that it was an angel

The fear and doubt when you feel that people around you look at you like you were different

The trust you never had in anyone and the fear of telling the truth

The breakdown when you lose the things that are most dear to you

And when you finally feel released the next day you feel like hell just started

The glory and popularity that you try to reach everyday and when you finally got it you realize that you never needed it because the only thing you cared about were your friends and now you lost them

The silence when you try to say sorry to someone but the pain is so big it goes beyond words and feelings

All good things you try to do everyday turning against you

The heart beat that you hear in the guilty silence

That glass wall that divides you from the things you want most

That spiked wall that hurts you every time you try to cross it to freedom

The never ending agony with witch your soul screams for an endless life

The shock when you realize everything around you is a lie and that what you think its freedom was actually the opposite

The struggle when the chains around your body start to carve their way into the flesh reaching the bones killing you in pain

The sadness when you realize some people would kill for the things you throw in the street
The feeling when you don’t know what death is… if the world around you ends or you end for the world

The small thought that comes into your mind after you read this and realize that you find yourself in 1 of these things and … the sadness when you think that tomorrow everything starts over again.


-Special Thanks to Ashley for grammar

-Special Thanks to Zuku for inspirational songs

This is my 1st Poem so i know its not perfect ill work harder for the future poems

Comment and let me know what you think about this
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Comments
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# Ashleeyy (ashiebear) 2009-11-05 2:20 PM PST
I love it <3

Ashley is FTW XD
[TDOH]E-Thug (kevinsdisgrace) 2009-11-05 2:29 PM PST
I SEE WUT u did der
-TDOH-gang polo (gangpolo) 2009-11-05 2:50 PM PST
love it,

f***ing damn good : D ^.^
[TDOH]Tekros (tekros1) 2009-11-05 2:58 PM PST
Nice!
and you came up with an impressive amount of things you are.
╔╤╤TDOH╤╤|SuperT|Robo╤╤╗ (darklp123) 2009-11-05 3:06 PM PST
nice job man
Plasticnemesis (plasticnemesis) 2009-11-06 5:35 AM PST
Great man! Absoulutely perfect IMO. Loads of stuff on it. It kinda if depressing but tells the truth.
[TDOH]Soul Reaper ︻デ═一 (hellsoulreaper92) 2009-11-06 6:39 AM PST
Thx for comments it means much to me =) and i wanted it to be sad ...
[TDOH] Deo _ Raver (smellslikedeo) 2009-11-06 6:48 AM PST
keep that good work

expression 10/10
style 10/10
Ravage (southpark75) 2009-11-06 7:04 AM PST
nice job man love it
Zukureneno©︻デ═一 (zukure) 2009-11-06 1:47 PM PST
super cool
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